BIP – 1.42 Sonja – The Train Posted on August 27, 2013 by Kate Here we pick up with Sonja and her brothers, on the train across the country, to her new school. Enjoy! View this document on Scribd Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
3 thoughts on “BIP – 1.42 Sonja – The Train”
I like the Canadian setting and cultural elements to this. I mean, obviously, it’s what you know, where you’re from. Parts of this excerpt seemed a bit rigid to me, like the train layout, but that’s just IMHO. I really loved the description of the sunrise. Reminds me of the hours long Technicolor sunsets/rises I remember from when I lived in Alaska. Thanks for sharing!
Thank you Sara!
I agree about the train setup – I think at some point it will be better to have one of the kids “discover” the layout of the train.
Right now it’s like a rough sketch outline to form the image in my mind.
Cool story!!! Loved it!! Jan xo
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