BIP – 1.42 Sonja – The Train

Here we pick up with Sonja and her brothers, on the train across the country, to her new school.  Enjoy!

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3 thoughts on “BIP – 1.42 Sonja – The Train

  1. I like the Canadian setting and cultural elements to this. I mean, obviously, it’s what you know, where you’re from. Parts of this excerpt seemed a bit rigid to me, like the train layout, but that’s just IMHO. I really loved the description of the sunrise. Reminds me of the hours long Technicolor sunsets/rises I remember from when I lived in Alaska. Thanks for sharing!

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    • Thank you Sara!

      I agree about the train setup – I think at some point it will be better to have one of the kids “discover” the layout of the train.

      Right now it’s like a rough sketch outline to form the image in my mind.

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