BIP – 1.11 John – Leaving Town Revised

Hi folks – I reworked the first chapter with John.  The idea here is create some understanding for John and his inner-conflict.  We need to understand where John’s coming from so that the behaviour I have planned for him later on will make sense.  This is laying the foundation for the reader to have some compassion for an earnest, fiercely talented kid with some serious anger issues.